A young girl that doesn't know what to do
She feels lost inside
She just moved, and has nothing to loose
Her only way out...FISHERS
They seem to have exactly what she needs
Companionship, friends, love
What more could she want at such sad moment in her life
But then there's this Dark side of fishers
A side she doesn't seem to see
A side in which they manipulate, and make her think as they wish
Now she's really loosing something,
As a matter of fact EVERYTHING
All of her time is spent doing "fisher activities"
she's loosing control of her schoolwork and family
until the last strand breaks
she looses her job
the only thing that actually made her happy
and kept her going no matter what
she finally realized what a pile of **** it all was
this was the strand that made her leave fishers
but now, she faced the stress
the uncertainty she had,
once again she was all alone
but she wasn't the only one who got away
other people who also used to be fishers united
and together
THEY GOT RID OF FISHERS
7 comments:
Did you write that. It sounds like a poem to me. By just reading your post, you made me want to read your independent reading book. It sounds very interesting. I like how you used colors on certain words that you thought stood out the most. I love it.
AH!!!! I WAS THERE WHEN YOU WERE WRITING IT!!! =DDD lol. awwwww it sounds cute~
and i like how even though it doesn't rhyme, it still has a poetic feel of it, and you DID summarize the whole story! good job :]
Wow Astrid! You wrote that?! It's an interesting poem. :D And the colors. Very pretty. It shows which words you want to really emphasize. So that's cool. So the poem you wrote pretty much summerized the whole story I guess. So nice job Astrid! ;)
i agree with carol. very creative.
AAawwww im just doing this for the extra credit!!!! *laugh out loud* im kidding, that was a nice poem. You have some talent. it would take me the rest of the year to summarize it in a poem. Nice Job.
Oooh!
Thats super awesome.
Its really cool beacause the poem is really good and then you can also understand whats going on in the book.
And yea
we both color coded our words
hehe
w0w!!! very beautifully written poem. i was shocked that the poem was so in depth and interesting to read.Usually, i like poems that rhyme, but reading yours was great. good job :)
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